Hello and welcome to Haiku Monday
Leave your entry/s in the comments section below...
I can't say that I'm not a little nervous about hosting this week but I will attempt to do my best.
For those of you in her path... I hope that you have or are surviving Irene's visitation and you all remain safe and dry!
My thoughts have been with you.
This weeks theme is MEMORY
My thoughts have been with you.
This weeks theme is MEMORY
Recollection fades...
If only one could re boot;
a tired old brain
Disconsertion haunts...
Time fogs memories’ recall
Is that how things went?
Princess, those haiku are beautiful!
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Like the first one the most.
ReplyDeleteDas deutsche Oberleutnant's Fraulein
Her bright blue vow
quickly faded. Soon, she wrote
a "Dear Hans" letter.
I don't want to enter the competition but I just want to propose my own first attempt.
ReplyDeleteI read all about japanese haiku and its english counterpart on Wikipedia so to get the whole story about it.
Your comments and advice, dear Princess, are gladly welcomed. Keep in mind that english is not my mother tongue! I'll try to post it on my blog tomorrow with a second one in french!
"Summer love resigns!
A slight trace of a man's scent.
Intoxicating!"
Bis bald!
Hugs
Jon
thanks Fleur
ReplyDeleteyour "pressed memory" is a charm
Thanks Troll
Nice work here...
Jon,
ReplyDeleteI am no expert but I would not hesitate in entering this fine first attempt, I'm sure other players can offer better advice than I!
I will give it a try then. I'm entering my little poem. Thanks Princess for your encouragement. I for myself, thought that my haiku was a little too explicit!
ReplyDeleteI posted it on my blog along with another one in french.
Hugs
Jon
Wonderful news Jon
ReplyDeleteI'll pop on over and check out your post and encourage others to do the same!
California;
ReplyDeleteseeing Mama's memory
in Evening Primrose
I am up with a visual. Loved your haikus, esp. the "re-booting" of the brain. Happy Haiku Monday!
Troll, Chickie and Jon: All wonderful.
ReplyDeleteFuscia-hued corsage.
Supple, fragrant bloom pressed flat.
Taste of love preserved.
Hi everyone! Hope you don't mind to have me play again this week? Thanks Princess -
ReplyDeleteAthens heat lightning
child’s eyes embrace the strange view
dad home from Viet Nam
What happened might have . . .
ReplyDeletewhat didn’t may as well have:
Perception trumps truth.
+++
Young Eddie Murphy,
little rascally. Buh-weet
says, “Amemba me?”
I'm up with:
ReplyDeleteStumble-stepped old dog
tilts nose to summer breeze. Sniffs:
tales of glory days.
Good luck everyone and thanks again for hosting, Princess! Love "re-boot."
Well, mercy. I got so tied up late this evenin' that time got away--an' now it's past the deadline.
ReplyDeleteGood luck all!
Good entries and it looks like you've inspired our French-Canadian friend.
ReplyDelete